Hello! like this? ^ ____ ^ I like the idea of ​​this story, but it seems very forced, fast and very short, could rewrite it with more time, up to three chapters, presents the story better if there is a dance, all will go as guests less Aramis, it hurts not being able to wear a dress, had also vowed never to use one, but the idea that women see it as Athos and to dance with him, given the value, enlists the help of Constance, to obtain a dress, wears a mask to avoid being recognized at the dance she sees Athos refuses all ladies, she also says no, but Aramis is risked much to be discovered, is wearing a dress silly for him clear that he would not take no for an answer to your effort, before the audacity of the young, Athos is indignant, but Aramis cares little decorum, does not care, he does not know who he is and after that night will not to see this young, Aramis is happy to dance with Athos, the calls at least the name of the bold, she tells him her real name, here I did not understand, Athos and Aramis found it was happy?, they danced the night, just for that night were only two of them, here could be extended chapters with several dances, to discover who she is, right after being madly in love with the disguised maiden, could be something like when Lady Oscar put on a dress to dance with Fersen, is only a good idea, I hope to continue with new stories, thanks for sharing ^ ____ ^.

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Oh my glob!

Thanks so much for the story! I understand that you didn't really like them as a couple but I really appreciate that you came up with a nice story! You made this lumpy princess happy!

- LSP