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Your lips have buried me
di Nathan_BvB_97_

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Recensore Master
02/09/14, ore 17:58

Terribile malattia a detta di come la spieghi nathan,
comunque sia è bello vedervi contenti a voi due,
chissà che avrete di bello da dirci più avanti?
vedremo
ciao
carino il capitolo
con affetto
shinran amore ^.^

Recensore Master
02/09/14, ore 08:45

Ehm...
so di aver pensato male all'inizio a leggere questa storia,
ma poi vedendo il tuo modo di scrivere e di vedere la tua vita,
ho capito che tu sei bravo a scrivere,
si deve migliorare un po',
ma ci sai fare,
fattelo dire :)
wow,
certo che ne dai di emozioni,
te e charlie che iniziate a capirvi,
shadow che si spara O.o (colpo di scena)
e sonic che limona con amy,
tutto naturale per ora,
chissà che metterai avanti?
vado a vedere
mi hai incuriosito,
ciao
con affetto
shinran amore ^.^

Nuovo recensore
01/09/14, ore 21:07
Cap. 5:

Gruppo ciao *-* sono tornata yee (fase pazzoide: ATTIVATA )XD. Ok basta. Il capitolo mi è piaciuto un casino e comunque mi è piaciuta anche l'argomentazione k tratti nel capitolo. Sai il fatto che la gente tende ad "attaccare" le persone "deboli" e "diverse" non se ne sente parlare però c'è...COMUNQUE...YOU ARE THE BEST ENGLISH-ITALIAN WRITER THAT I SEE. Ti voglio bene continua così :3 kiss =*

Recensore Junior
03/08/14, ore 17:27
Cap. 4:

Fratellone, non è che percaso l'Alaska ti ha congelato il cervello!?? @-@
However... Ho visto alcuni errori , ma non sono gravi caro U_U
Emmm... Dear cousin : I'm sorry but I have to tell u that u won't die U__U cause I FUCKIN' NEEEEEEEED U @^@ What if u die? Simple, I will die to. U r a part of me so... DO NOT DIE.
However: brother u r really good at italian, eermmmm... I already knew that u will move here in Italy lol Cx Emm.. How to say .. What bout moving there? In my little unknowned town?? *^*
Will Charlie , Rey Rey, Joy , Lance , Andrew and Timothy move here with u?
I'm curious , I know u.u
Btw, I love this story , actually, is in my fav list *^* U r so good at italian omg u r amazing!! *-*
Pff..AHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAH :'D AMAZING !! Cx This remind me of veeoneeye or veetwoeye, in the episode of the pizza in Italy Cx The " amazing " counter AHAHHAHAH :'D Omg Cx I can't stop laughing x33 Amazing Cx btw I fuckin' love Jason's hair they r so ... So ... SO... AMAZING CX ( img wtf am I writing it sound like I'm drunk while I'm writing the same parol for the 4th time ahahhah lol Cx But I can't stop laughing, "mazing is my head oh damn Cx ) Btw I dyed my hair
in ourple I will upload my pics on fb , I'll do it when I wamt and when I can, I just got home amd I'm sooooo fuckin' tired Cx Actually I
don't even want to log on fb , It's ... How to say.. Stressante Cx Well , everyday I have about 40/50 friend request a lot of
messages and news are such us 99+ , and don't talk bout pokes!! Omg they r... Too much!! @-@
And then, I hat it when 18 or worse 50 years old perverts ask a dirty pic of me or a nude at the 1st message!! Fuck that shit I can't stand this!!!
Btw did u really died ur bangs in midnight blue?? I love that color!! *-*
Did u see the last video uploades by baptismonfire2? AHAHAHAHHAHAHAH :'D omg , it's amazing the hottest , saddest love story ever between a hedegehpg and a fuckin'pervert youtuber ( unattractive btw , such as an awful overweight bear Cx ) btw the youtuber been bunned by baptismonfire2's channel ahahhahah OMG !! Cx I can't stop laughing HAHAHAHH Cx Today I'm so fuckin' happy , meabe cause in this week I became a pokeball!? Cx I'm not jocking Cx
Am I dweeling too much?? O__o Idk , btw I don't have to get worried bout this , I know that u love reading what I write to u , thinking that I'm drunk or worse that I smoke something bad -.- Uuuff!! Awe u know that I don't smoke drugs , I don't even smoke cigarettes @-@ And I'm always sober U___U I'm a good girl!! U should know this .
But if u think I'm not.... I'n sorry dear bau u shouldn't have done that .___.
Omg when did I become BEN DROWNED !? °^°
AHAHAHA Cx I ate a pancake yesterday, ong it was such us ... AMAZING! @-@ ( Hum wtf!?? Cx )
U saw the humming challenge of Jordan!!? AHHAHAH Cx
It made me laugh as there was no a tomorrow ( ok , wtf I just wrote, it's got no sense , I'm really thinking that at my birth there was alchohol in in the air and I got drunk by the birth .-. I'm not jocking I'm really worried Cx )
Ok let's stop saying bitches and be serious .____. ( it sound like fun , I just wrote such us 800 parols , amd it was just the starting part of the message, omg Cx )
How's it going? What does Alaska look like? U joined it?
How's your... Arm?
And what bout Charlie , how's he?
Are u already writing the 5th chapter of this story?
Is it too difficult? U need a help or not?
How's writing without using google translate? Is it more simple? Is it more difficult?
Btw who won the ice-cream challenge??
I guess Ryan won, he eats like an alligator!! Cx
I'm dweeling too muuuuch @-@ I can't stop writing!!! It sounds like fun ( egain, omg .-.) Cx Am I under someone Idk's spell??? Cx
Well gtg, I have a bat neck-ache T^T ( Actually, I have a bad case of diarea ).
Love ya so much , write as fast as u can!!! I love this story, amd u r really good at Italian so readers don't have problems with reading Cx <3
See u in the next chapter ( actually, see u later on fb x3 )
<3
Love ya so much brother <3
A big hug,
sere_rainbow_biersack

Nuovo recensore
01/08/14, ore 09:47
Cap. 4:

Ehi ciao :) non preoccuparti non ho visto alcun errore e anzi, ho divorato il capitolo hai scritto benissimo ❤❤❤ P.S. posso farti una domanda? Sempre se non entro nel personale. Chi...sí insomma...chi sono "quelle che consideri come le tue sorelline"?
0///0 SE NON VUOI RISPONDERMI TI CAPIRÒ >.< kiss by love_for_books

Recensore Junior
20/07/14, ore 19:27
Cap. 3:

Wooah SO HOT .
Gnignigni @-@ Oh you dumb NO!! U r not hopeless at italian! U r brilliant at it!! And ... I'm so glad for giving u more italian lessons , u r a good student ;) Omfg I tried to write an ff in english but OMG ._. It's so fuckin' difficult @-@ So, you don't have to say that u r hopeless at italian cause u r not , u r really good at it and I like ur ffs cause they r cute and hot and amazing *-* U r cute too U__U Well brother... I'm a bit... HUNGRY @___@ Awe U know I am ALWAYS hungry x33
Good luck <3 U r a gorgeous dark fallen angels , u r strong , u r always strong , and I'll always support u <3
Write as faster as u can !!
I want the 4th chapter!! And I want it soon!! <3
See u in the next chapeter!! <3
Byye <3 <3 <3
Love u so much brother <3
A big hug,
sere_rainbow_biersack

Nuovo recensore
18/07/14, ore 17:31
Cap. 3:

Ma figurati :) nn ringraziarmi :) mi piace molto la tua ff ❤❤❤ attendo con pazienza il seguito :D sono curiosissima di come continuerà :) continua cosi k sei fantastica :)

Recensore Veterano
09/07/14, ore 08:09

Ciau Nathan :)
Eccomi qua a recensire
Mamma mia che carini che siete tu e Charlie :3 awwww <3
Hai scritto tutto benissimo :3
Aspetto il terzo capitolo :3
Ciau ciau
Fede_Silver

Recensore Veterano
09/07/14, ore 08:00

Nathan! Credo che tu abbia capito che sia Federica :)
Sono felice che tu abbia scritto qualcosa :3
E se poi questo è il risultato continua a scrivere :)
Scrivi molto bene
Vado a leggere il secondo capitolo
Ciao!

Recensore Junior
04/07/14, ore 23:53

Omfg .___. U n Charlie r sooo hot!! I like you two togetheeeer :'333 U 2 r sooo cute!! And u r really good at italian!! I'm glad of it!!
Poor Shadow, but I can't stop laughing!! Imagine Rou's face when she saw Shadow dead on the street OMFG x33 ahahh, THE EPIC FACEPALM!! dude you are soo simpy brother x3 Shadow the KING OF DRAMA x33 OMG
Shadow: shut up you shit..
Me: bitch plz, I'm a motherfucker unicorn!!
Shadow: Yez ok, dumb unicorn!! But I'm not the KING OF DRAMA!!
Me: blablabla, I guys!! I'm shadow !! I really hate this fuckin' place !! Oooh poor me!! I can't stand my fuckin' life!! I can only die!!

Omg!! Oh brother I love this ff !! It's amazing !! I don't wanna wait a lot for the 3rd chapter!! Sooo... Be fast!! x33 I really love this ff!! I kove this sooo much!!
Ommmmmmhh... Yeah... That
thing between Silver n Blaze... Emmm ... ._____________. my
face was like °^° or .____. or
OMFG WTF AM I READING?? or @_@ or *Q* x33
I did't expect this!!
But they 2 r so cute!! And u n Charlie are cute as well!! ... No.. You n Charlie r the cutest!!
Omg!! I love this ff so so so so much!!
I wanna read he 3rd chapter soon!! So... Plz .. Write as fast as u can!!
Love ya brother, so much!!
A big hug,
sere_rainbow_biersack

Recensore Junior
04/07/14, ore 23:32

Oooh!! *-* Uno yaoi , scritto da te poi!!! Ti adoro fratellone ti adoro ti adoro ti adoro, è bellissimo questo capitolo, I'll read the 2nd chapter !!
I really loved the first chapter!! U n Charlie together are soooo cute and sweetie!!
U r brilliant at italian! I like the way u write, sooo much!! C'mon!! You can do everything if u want!! @ the moment , for me , u r the strongest person in the world!! So... Go on! Don't look back , don't turn back!! Just ... Go on! U can do it, i truely believe in u!!
Love ya brother!! <3 <3 <3
A big hug,
sere_rainbow_biersack

Nuovo recensore
04/07/14, ore 10:09

É molto bella :) :D non vedo l'ora di leggere il continuo di questa ff :) continua così :) ❤ baci by love_ for_books

Recensore Veterano
03/07/14, ore 23:45

Ciaoooo Nath!!!! *lo abbraccia*
é bello vedere una tua storia nella sezione dedicata a Sonic *^*
Sicuramente ti stai chiedendo "chi è questa pazza?" XD
Bhe, sono io Elena (esatto, quella pazza svitata di tua "madre")^^
come storia è veramente interessante ^3^ e non vedo l'ora di leggere il prossimo capitolo *^*
Bye bye
EleNeiro

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