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Il ritorno della Maschera di Ferro
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Finale decisamente con il botto! |
Ciao, |
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Che dire se non... |
Ecco, E' accaduto. E quando Aramis decide di "scendere in campo" tra le lenzuola quello che succede non è mai scontato. Del resto è un soldato, non una monachella e ad una comprensibile timidezza da prima volta si unisce il sano desiderio ed una buona dose di spavalderia moschettiera! Ottima anche la battuta su Porthos! E se proprio non sa proprio tutto-tutto Athos non aspetta altro che renderla edotta nell'arte dell'amore! |
Hello! like this? ^ ____ ^, A beautiful and sensual chapter, after the visit in the morning Athos, Aramis had all day to think about your relationship with him, what he wanted with him, at night you work up the courage, went to the Athos room, she knocked on the door but once entered, he saw the musketeer was preparing for the night, Aramis saw the man's strong back, she would not let the door handle when the hill stood still, just looking down embarrassed, he had not turned to her, Aramis was hesitant, but steady, Athos finally turned to her, when he saw her, I ask him what to there, but she did not respond, I stare in amazement when she realized that her nightgown was translucent, she was naked, Aramis raised his eyes to cross with him, she went to Athos, he had no doubt now, I embrace lost in his eyes that left no doubt what happened that morning, kiss him with all her love, she pushed it back until I get to the bed where I push, Athos fell into bed, but immediately wanted to sit Aramis stopped him sitting on it, then Aramis told him that I take all of it, now she wanted all of Atho, she began to play his strong chest, until I get to the buttons of his pants, opened it, put his hand looking for his member, but when I touch the retreat quickly, blushed but try again when she saw him look at her with love the kiss, then I call Athos, he tried to contain his desire, not wanted to do something that hurt later, but she repeated the same thing as said in the morning, which is shut up, Aramis to Athos that increase desire, trying to control turned from his lips, took the bold hand, told her if she knew what she did, she asked if he liked, with a mischievous smile, he amazed his boldness, without being able to think he said he thought she was a virgin, Aramis replied that if it was, as he kissed her neck, wonder how wise?, Aramis said it was Porthos, D'Artagnan to the answer, I remain perplexed, almost wanted to go to beat his friend to see his reaction is funny Aramis hasten to say that theory was only six years with the Musketeers had to learn something, Athos said he did not know whether to be angry or to thank, she answered they would find out that soon, finally naked Aramis, Athos to this vision was not able to resist more, to his fair lady, began to recognize each other, Athos Aramis finally made the turn, so that now she is in the bed, he began to kiss her and touch her, but was separated from her, wanted to know if Aramis Athos was sure what he was doing, they eventually join, soon realized that Porthos does not explain everything, as he saw her blush virgin girl, Aramis suddenly returned to his innocence, but being a gentleman and a skilled lover, treat her as gently Aramis as he could, knowing it was her first time, did not want to hurt her, he knew as he should love her, to finally declared their love, made love all night, Aramis now belonged to him alone that the value of Aramis to Athos go to the room, risking rejection, as a gentleman who only wanted to respect, and shows that was not as innocent as he thought, at that time I doubt she was a virgin, nearly drowned when he said Athos Porthos taught, but only in theory, and wanted to go to challenge him for daring to touch his lady, second theory of knowledge was Aramis, who learned it from Milady and Alexander when they captive, when Aramis Athos began to seduce thought I would leave half, as he did with her in the morning and then go to the your room to look, was also waiting at any time Alexander burst through the window, to take Aramis and Athos hurt, they finally consummated their love, but now that there will be consequences, Aramis can get pregnant, if the captain knows what happened between them, Athos risks being shot, Alexander knows well if he dared to touch her Renee, you're dead, but it was supposed to be wound back, the effort did not hurt the wound, not opened?, speaking wounds and will explain the stains on the sheets of Athos?, now just need the proposed Athos, when's the wedding?, I hope the next chapter, thanks for sharing ^ _____ ^. |
Aramis ha deciso di prendere l'iniziativa e le ci è voluto coraggio; Athos non poteva non mostrarle il suo amore, e finalmente sono uniti; ma i pericoli non sono finiti, immagino; se De Treville sapesse cosa è avvenuto nei suoi appartamenti non lo giudicherebbe un atteggiamento da soldati, credo! Non ti auguro buon compleanno perché si dice che il giorno prima non si facciano gli auguri; ad ogni modo bravissima per il capitolo! |
bellissimaaaaaaaaa .....athos sa bene come convicere una donna...se aramis scappa da lui è una stupida ...attendo il seguito .....brava |
Il capitolo è scorrevole e si legge senza intoppi, non è mancante di certe parti, non preoccuparti; Aramis è generosa, ma così ha ferito Athos; meno male che lui ha mangiato la foglia e ha usato i suoi.. metodi più convincenti per farle fare dietrofront; bella l'immagine di Porthos amico tenero e disinteressato. |
Hello! I hope this good! ^ ____ ^, A chapter touching, beautiful, the doctor said the wound was not serious, but did not understand why not wake up, they feared the worst, but after days of anguish awoke Aramis, Porthos and Dartagnan were happy to recover the fourth musketeer, Captain caught the attention of Aramis, she immediately behaved like a soldier who was, she told them that Alexander was in the Iron Mask, the captain said he already had his suspicions, but now he was sure, he asked if he remembered something else, Aramis said he remembered all she could see everything but had no control of her body, she apologized to his friends attack, Porthos and Dartagnan said they understood and could not blame her for what happened, Aramis was relieved , immediately asked by the enemy, the captain told him that Milady was dead at the hands of Alexander, as for him, they escape, the captain knew that it bothered Aramis, the men told him to put protecting the barracks, Aramis just nodded, then she look in the room, until he saw Athos front, she started, but Athos advanced towards her, hug, hug Aramis corresponded to when he wanted to kiss her but she rejected it, he said that if was for mourning, and had explained the reason, but when was that, when he apologized for the grief, she tried to say it was not that, but the words he had recorded the said Alexander, only hid the head between his knees, saying he did not love Athos, it was all a hoax, just wanted his friendship, Athos said he did not believe that all this being told in front, Aramis asked to leave, Athos said nothing but left the locket on the table, she did not move, Athos expected a reaction but there was none, all left the room, all but the then stood Porthos, but the reaction did not stroke her hair, scolded for refusing to love of his life, so try to Athos that he loved her and she him, Aramis I explain what Alexander told him not to let another man approached him, he killed everyone who has loved, could not forgive if Athos harmed because of him, she cried until she fell asleep, then came out to tell all Porthos Athos, but when he found the giant, he paused a moment, Athos was reflective with a bottle and a glass of wine, said Porthos you would not believe what he said Aramis, Athos said he knew exactly what she has in mind, I knew her too well to know that what I wanted to protect, which would leave in the morning thinking and talk to her, for good or poor, the morning went to look but could not find, she was going when he saw Athos, half naked, with a shirt that covered his long, thinking it was about her, kiss her, frightened at seeing Aramis, treatment to stop the subject but he began to kiss, in a moment ceased to resist Aramis, Athos caressed her with fervor, in a moment, grabbing his shirt, he remembered his promise Athos, if the match would have earned all of it, well I was doing, I try to protest Aramis but he did not stop loving when he wanted more Aramis, Athos stopped her, saying he only wanted to see her enjoy, sent it to the top, she had never experienced anything like this, when Aramis recovered Athos told her she was beautiful, the loved, hugged her, told her partner was his friend, but they were a man and a woman who loved him and he never let her go, he told her to rest, still not recovered, smiled and left the room leaving Aramis tired and bewildered. |
disgraziata! che paura che mi hai fatto prendere!! :) |
Hello! like this? ^ ____ ^, A dramatic chapter, Athos runs off in search of Milady, but only finds a catatonic Renee, when asked if properly replied Milady, she informed the state that has it, knowing Athos, in a fit of rage the insult, Milady began to reproach the past, so the two began to reproach, Milady finally told him he could not bear her out of her heart, she wanted to be unique, although it was only by hatred , but knowing that Aramis was a woman and that they loved each other, can not stand jealousy for not being more n your heart, this added to his accomplices were killed by Renee, Milady actually hated the girl, without thinking it Athos said she was not in his mind and heart, Milady wanted the hated Renee, she said they were equal, both women lied, lied Renee said Athos only sex, but that his feelings were real, while she lied without impórtale all, the wise woman who told the truth, that the more furious that without thinking, ordered him to kill Renee through her heart Athos, Athos had to take care of the sword of Renee, but she managed to rip your jacket, when he tried to retrieve the score sheet, he tangled with the chain of the medallion, Renee stared while a tear fell, she said Francois, Milady mocked Athos, that Renee just thought of his dead love, Athos said the reason that he understood the feelings of Renee, but she still loved him, Athos I take to disarm the young man in a jealous rage end Milady Renee shot in the back, Athos could not help it, the girl fell into his arms, mocked Milady finally beat him, but Athos did not listen, iron mask entered the room, seeing the scene before he was rushed on Milady, demanding his betrayal, his deception, she dared to harm her Renee, Alexander takes Milady's neck throwing out the window at the Seine, Alexander returns to where it Athos, telling him his fault Renee's death, but that their suffering will not last long, that the place was going to explode, he escapes leaving the musketeer with the body of his beloved, is ready to die with her, when Renee shows signs of life, desperately tries to escape the explosion, get safely hidden in a fireplace, friends find them, this chapter had an almost tragic end, now has to go quickly to the barracks to save Renee, but still achieve save her, she will awaken from this trance?, Alexander escaped, he still is a threat if Renee recovers, Milady is dead now if?, Athos was finally able to get all the hate that was in his heart, he understood the reasons for Renee to lie, will never compare to Aramis, Milady, that if she saved without consequences, because Milady shot in the back, she might be paralyzed, but only react with the medallion, citing Francois?, you have to do with his lack of memory?, Athos understands why?, knows that she loves him, but I attack only stopped for the medal, now is not to be separated from the infirmary barracks, I hope the next chapter, but I think we will end buuuuu, thanks for sharing ^ ______ ^. |
Un capitolo molto avvincente, che tiene incollata l'attenzione! Milady e Athos si sono feriti a vicenda, avendo di volta in volta ragione ora l'uno ora l'altra; il vero colpevole di tutto è stato il mondo meschino che ha distrutto la piccola Anne trasformandola nella crudele Milady; è vero anche che pure Renée ha sofferto per le stesse ragioni, ma per riscattarsi lei ha scelto il bene, all'opposto di Milady; questa non sopportava che un'altra prendesse il suo posto nel cuore dell'uomo che odiava e amava al contempo; la conclusione non poteva che essere tragica. |
finalmente ho un po' di calma per lasciare il mio zampino sulla tua storia! |
Hello! like this? ^ _____ ^, The next morning Athos had almost recovered from his wounds, one was a penalty for failing to protect Renee, the captain helped the bureaucracy to entertain cases at that time came, Porthos and Dartagnan to view the status of their arrival the captain and Athos were surprised, told the wounded who were responsible for the ambush and that it was Aramis ally but had suspicions that something had been done, because according to the Gascon she had no reaction whatsoever Athos was furious to learn that Milady dared to do something, then Rocheford entered without knocking, without courtesy demanded an explanation of who was the young, assuming that they knew, he was surprised at the strength, agility and skill with the beat, but as well express their abilities, began to hint about her, like how beautiful she was, what he would do when he catches it, especially began to be obscene in detail his body, that Porthos and Dartagnan I stop him saying it was high Renee, besides being the beloved of Athos, this Rocheford Athos stayed watching this silent, Count laughed at him, made comments about their tastes in women, revealing that Milady was his wife, while comparing the two women, Athos shook with anger, but everything got worse when he said that Milady was beautiful, crazy but beautiful, as he retired to Renee, shoulder the resemblance he had with Aramis, believing Athos seeking a replacement for his friend, thinking he had some preferences, but the conversation changed when his friends realized the words of the Count, Milady was his wife, the musketeer wanted to strangle the Count by talker, he had forgotten that Milady work for the Cardinal, I was sure I knew who he was, now I better tell the truth to their friends, Athos said yes, the Gascon rushed to wonder if Renee knew, Athos said Milady told her when they met in the barracks, to these words the Count asked what happened, he realized that what we hide and cause of the attack was the young, the captain told him the truth hoping for an ally, the Earl thoughtfully wonder why it was important young, first Aramis kills and then this girl, this the earl came to the truth, the captain bag Aramis and Renee doubt if the same person, Porthos rushed to threaten to reveal the truth, the count began, nonsense, he was relieved because he also was attracted to Aramis, but now knew it was a woman, then cultivated his authority made a report of what happened at night, where he said they had lost, Manson's mansion, but said cas they explored and found nothing, Dartagnan said he was unaware of the passages, they made a plan to storm the mansion once, that night were ready, at a time when serious talk Count Athos, he said if he really loved her, if I let Athos, Count apologized for everything he said he would help her save her, they came to a room where I was waiting, Milady made Athos left the group, the others were withdrawn until they fell to the basement, Porthos, and Count Dartagnan sought a way out, but before and heard that cry of pain, went to the garden where barrels of gunpowder were ready to explore, could only run a few yards when exploded, Athos and thought Aramis were inside when it exploded. |