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WOW!!!
Davvero, è triste, ma che belle parole!!!
Certo che ci stai proprio scapocciando co 'sti tagli, eh!!! haha xD
Non è che mò la mia Lou si taglia!!!
Eh, mi dispiace, ma non posso regalarti mio marito Tommo, mi dispiace, se non mi amasse così tanto te lo darei perchè TVTB!!!
Però mica vuoi che mio marito Lou si tagli eheh no no!!! ahhaahaha xD
NOOOOOOOOOO BASTA STOPP
No Lou sto SCAPOCCIANDO di brutooooo!!!
Vabbè, insomma bella OS (?)
e ti lovvo ;*
un bacione <3 |
Ciao come ti avevo promesso qualche settimana fa, sono passato per recensire alcune delle tue storie.
Non saprei ma questa OS mi ha intristito molto anche perché mi sembra molto autobiografica.
La trama è molto interessante e parla di un problema, l'autolesionismo, molto comune tra i giovani d'oggi.
La mia domanda però é: chi é che ha lasciato la protagonista? perché non hai dato nessuno indizio che mi permettesse di capire
Per il resto mi è piaciuta molto :)
Pierre
P.s. Questi te li meriti e che ti tirino su, spero che quello che fa la protagonista tu non lo faccia mai:
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È scritta piuttosto bene. Il tema è ben affrontato, mi ricorda molto la mia sul medesimo argomento ^^
Non so se è autobiografica, se sì posso dirti che non vale la pena. Non si può cancellare il passato, ma il futuro è una pagina bianca, pronta da scrivere, e siamo noi a decidere che svolta darle ^^
In bocca al lupo e... continua a scrivere, perchè hai un buono stile ^^ |
Ohi,
Normalmente non recensisco storie "su richiesta" ma mi limito a leggerle :'3 Questa volta faccio uno strappo alla regola lol
La tua storia è bella, scritta bene non c'è dubbio e anche dal punto di vista formale non è male, anzi!
Quello che mi ha lasciato un po' con l'amaro in bocca e stato il finale. Per quanto mi riguarda l'ho trovato un po' troppo "frettoloso". I paragrafi - posso chiamarli così? - precedenti erano esaustivi di per sè, solo che boh il finale me lo immaginavo un po' più lungo e "approfondito".
Ma è una mia opinione, così com'è mia opinione che soffrire d'amore non sia un motivo abbastanza valido per iniziare a "tagliarsi". Ma siamo tutti diversi e alcune cose possono avere più effetto che per altri. Dico questo perchè hai trattato un tema molto delicato che in parte mi è vicino :'3 E' per questo che ti recensisco un po' troppo "schiettamente"; l'idea è davvero molto, molto buona. solo la prossima volta prova a svilupparla un po' di più. Non dico fare die papiri ^^'' Perchè non occorre :'3 Ma ecco, il senso credo tu l'abbia capito.
Oh, spero che tu non te la prenda! Anche perchè la storia mi è piaciuta davvero parecchio! Altrimenti non sarei qui a scrivere un poema epico :3 Sono solo degli appunti che ti faccio in veste di lettrice. E che tu, ovviamente, sei liberissima di seguire o meno :'3
E l'introspezione è ottima <3
Alla prossima,
*hugs*
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