É davvero bello il primo capitolo ti prego ti prego continuala adoro la quogan

awwwww!!!! è bellissima!!! seriamente, continuala perchè è meravigliosa!! poi la parte più bella è quando logan parla a quinn! mi piace moltissimo!!

Seriamente ho scritto questa roba? Oddio come ero persa HAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHaHAHAHAHHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAVV Giulia di quest'estate, che combini?

Credo che sia un pò mediocre e poi è un pò troppo corta, secondo me.
Pensavo che prima avresti introdotto un pò come è nato l'amore tra Quinn e Logan dato che la storia parla di loro. 
Cioè per quanto ho capito dovrebbe essere dedicata a loro.
Comunque la mia e solo una critica costruttiva :) 
Scrivi bene ma secondo me devi migliorare un pò sulle cose che ti ho elencato, bye :)

...dunque...piacere di conoscerti Julia, io sono Carl:(Autore e Scrittore),per essere la tua prima ''fict'' l'hai narrata abbastanza bene...sono molto contento di sapere che ci sono molti altri autori/trici a cui piace scrivere le storie di questa serie televisiva...sono un'autore comprensivo e paziente, io sinceramente...non guardo quasi mai gli errori grammaticali ma mi concentro di più sul contenuto della narrazione...in questo racconto tu hai descritto molto bene l'inizio...dove si trovavano i ragazzi...e cosa stessero facendo...però alla fine (come per ogni racconto dovrebbe essere) mancava quella...''frase'' che attizzava le persone a continuare la lettura...tuttavia la storia, ad'occhi esperti è carina e anche scorrevole...e...non preoccuparti...quasi tutti nel primo capitolo sbagliamo...e se tivà (e se ti è d'aiuto)...potresti leggere la mia storia...
''Ti ho sempre amata'' di Zoey 101...cosi potresti vedere un pò com'è strutturata...-sempre se ti và-...e...se hai bisogno di qualche consiglio o qualche dubbio che non ti è chiaro...non esitare a chiedere...ok?...io...ci sono sempre...stammi bene Julia...a presto.............................-Carl-.........................

Molto bella mi é piacita molto. Anche se non hai scritto molto la storia in se é bella. Non hai fatto errori grammaticali. Spero che farai molto presto il prossimo capitolo, spero anche che parlerai della coppia zoey chase. A presto.

Mattia990

Per essere la tua prima fanfic mi sembra ottima e non vedo l'ora di leggere il seguito sopratutto perché adoro la coppia logan e quinn

Ciao. allora ne ho lette molte di fan fiction su zoey 101. E mi aspettavo realmente di più . è troppo mediocre sul serio. grammaticamente parlando non ho trovato errori.ma come narrazione è un po' noiosa. sarà perché è il primo capitolo e quindi c'è da aspettare. ma dopo questo prologo sinceramente non ho voglia di continuare, ma non ti abbandonerò a volte è difficile con il prologo. e comunque l'introduzione in home non è una delle migliori non è interessante o come avrebbe detto la mia professoressa non è accattivante. è il tuo biglietto da visita e deve convincere i lettori..quindi io rifarei il compito un ci amiamo e questo conta. può sembrare ispirato alla storia di greta. oppure riferimenti casualib tranquilla sono stata corretta anch' io e mi ha reso migliore . più suspense ricorda. un bacione e alla prossima .
scusami se ti ho offesoa ma sincerità prima di tutto . e in quanto agli errori nella recensione sono dal cellulare ..perdonami.