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27/12/13, ore 23:45

Seriamente ho scritto questa roba? Oddio come ero persa 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Giulia di quest'estate, che combini?

Nuovo recensore
30/08/13, ore 01:08

Credo che sia un pò mediocre e poi è un pò troppo corta, secondo me.
Pensavo che prima avresti introdotto un pò come è nato l'amore tra Quinn e Logan dato che la storia parla di loro. 
Cioè per quanto ho capito dovrebbe essere dedicata a loro.
Comunque la mia e solo una critica costruttiva :) 
Scrivi bene ma secondo me devi migliorare un pò sulle cose che ti ho elencato, bye :)

Recensore Master
22/08/13, ore 16:56

Ciao. allora ne ho lette molte di fan fiction su zoey 101. E mi aspettavo realmente di più . è troppo mediocre sul serio. grammaticamente parlando non ho trovato errori.ma come narrazione è un po' noiosa. sarà perché è il primo capitolo e quindi c'è da aspettare. ma dopo questo prologo sinceramente non ho voglia di continuare, ma non ti abbandonerò a volte è difficile con il prologo. e comunque l'introduzione in home non è una delle migliori non è interessante o come avrebbe detto la mia professoressa non è accattivante. è il tuo biglietto da visita e deve convincere i lettori..quindi io rifarei il compito un ci amiamo e questo conta. può sembrare ispirato alla storia di greta. oppure riferimenti casualib tranquilla sono stata corretta anch' io e mi ha reso migliore . più suspense ricorda. un bacione e alla prossima .
scusami se ti ho offesoa ma sincerità prima di tutto . e in quanto agli errori nella recensione sono dal cellulare ..perdonami.