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And here it was, the «last part of the road» the four friends made together^^ |
Trovo che la scena iniziale sia bellissima, così leggera e "familiare". Hai aperto il capitolo con un momento di tangibile felicità e lo hai chiuso con una mesta considerazione di Athos che mi ha riportata "alla realtà dei fatti", fuori da quella bolla di apparente tranquillità che hai creato con gli ultimi due capitoli. |
Ciao! |
Continuo sempre a seguirti, mi piace la tua storia, ora vediamo come si svilupperà. |
Hello! like this? ^ _____ ^ I like this chapter, it seems that Athos to restart his relationship with Aramis, but feels as cold and distant, while traveling their approaches are cautious, his friends were concerned that they did not find, they rejoiced when they found and in what form, perched on a tree drawing (Type Candy Candy, freckled Tarzan as Terry told), the musketeer was captivated by his jokes, his character, trying to talk to her, to hold her, but Aramis was defensive, was not aggressive, but very elusive, she resisted making seduced, the musketeer accept the challenge, the Musketeers continued their journey to reach a forest, who apparently was known for Athos, Aramis realized the attitude of his companion, she was suspicious when several men barred their way, especially in your sinuses names Earl, after arguing that there was no reason to stop, Aramis ordered to follow, but one of the men wanted to stop, that Athos has intervened, giving know, that he was the Earl, owner of the land, after the welcome, were taken to a hunting lodge, ready for your accommodation, at dinner, Aramis saw Athos was tighter than usual, but his sense of no warning, the next day would investigate the tower, the musketeer saw her frown not, but wanted to enjoy the bath if indeed she relaxed, but I wanted to talk to her partner, she would look at the floor, he was looking for and reading documents, Aramis rebuked him for not going to rest, he had a cot nearby, was not the best to rest at home, she was upset, I look and quickly retreat, Athos wanted but could not reach it, lay Aramis in bed, as was large Athos wished to fill the void, one minute after his wish was fulfilled, the musketeer first took a bath, and then meet in the bed with her lover, she accepted with pleasure, but distressed that see their brands, asked to turn off the light indiscreet, Athos understood his discomfort, turn off the light, but saying she had nothing to hide, that he loved her no matter what, the kiss scars, they are together and happy at last made love all night, until he was asleep, Athos is cursed for not being able to swear his life to Aramis, Athos finally regained the love of Aramis, she has accepted it, but something is concerned, the musketeer Aramis will be protected, the ghost dwelling in the tower for three years?, Aramis was afraid of losing Athos, which he was confronted by his past, I think I only faithful Grimaud was informed of the identity of Aramis, Athos wanted her to feel comfortable, also do not think all the rooms have a large bed, Aramis finally returned to his beloved, that new dangers they have booked the witch, I hope the next chapter, thanks for sharing ^ _____ ^. |
Ho letto questo capitolo gia\' un paio di volte, stavo per commentarlo gia\' circa un\'oretta fa ma poi... Va boh... Quello che mi piace molto del capitolo e\' proprio il fatto che sia \"on the road\"... Adoro la prima parte che cerca di ricalcare bene l\'anime ed ammiro la seconda, dal finale appassionato,ma anche vagamente imprevedibile. In questo caso aspettare queste lunghe settinane ne e\' valsa proprio la pena! Grazie per aver pubblicato |
Per il momento posso commentare dicendo solo "ooooooooh....."? |
ciao! che bel capitolo! dopo tante disavventure e intoppi ci voleva un pò di relax per i due piccioncini! e poi tu hai reso una descrizione sublime...la scena si immagina perfettamente ma senza scendere nel dettaglio dei particolari che la renderebbero macchinosa(io ne so qualcosa ). bella anche la scena dell'albero..mi piace come fai emergere il lato giocoso di Aramis e degli altri con naturalezza ad evidenziare la forte amicizia che li lega nonostante tutte le vicissitudini passate insieme..o forse proprio per quelle |
Bel capitolo. |
Hello, gaiaton, |
Non ho recensito tutta la fic (anche perche' stilisticamente e' perfetta e non ho niente da dire), ma ieri ho riletto questo capitolo e mi sono dimenticata di scrivere come 3/4 del forum francese andrebbe in brodo di giuggiole se lo leggesse!! |
finalmente sono riuscita a mettermi in pari con la tua storia che è sempre bella ed appassionante.anzi, se possibile, migliora sempre più! |
Hello! here again! ^ _____ ^, That surprise two chapters, a woman went to Athos, she gave an order he did, I think when Athos asked to be alone to settle their affairs, the thinking and intentions of Milady, at that time wrote to his friends to send him the antidote, but as you may only have three doses, the will to sacrifice?, the going to give them the antidote before dying?, if he gets sick, no one will be the in others, they have not thought Aramis?, it is more likely that the woman is expecting, Athos, Aramis must care for, she will be the target Milady sure, the musketeer also asked a few designs jewelry, she handed him some drawings, is sending some jewelry to make give them to Aramis?, but sure not to return to give them in person, as you can think of to make her suffer so, have everything ready before the worst destinations, but I think if he thought of being protected, she placed an antidote in the body?, all are arranging their affairs, Aramis is leaving Charmine son safe, after all gather to dine with Dartagnan, arrange the last details, Aramis is taking too much wine, and had everything ready, the captain came on that I think is not very happy to see Aramis with them, especially dressed as a man, but is proud of her, the captain gave him a bag Aramis, insurance is the traditional uniform of Aramis, are ready again the four musketeers, Athos is thinking that your friends are going to save, while giving the antidote, except that with his last breath will give them medicine, frankly hope that at no time this poisoned, but if one of them is poisoned, only to have his friends realize they had planned on, without taking into account, I thought Captain Athos and Aramis would oppose outside with them, will not be exposed to the danger is that woman, I hope the next chapter, thanks for sharing ^ ____ ^. |
Hello! as a state? ^ _____ ^, Excellent!, You complete the chapter, has taken a full turn, frustrated Aramis next day I hope to hear from Athos, when he saw it was happy, but he was the bearer of bad news, the witch has escaped and gained revenge with his first victim, Charmine, this coup was to Aramis, but the most affected was Porthos, not clear to me, Athos, if he had to reveal his true identity?, ho escape thanks to the witch, did not have to ?, at least there's one less enemy, perhaps Charmine Aramis had a son going to take? and camping together to establish their movements, after the news about her friend, Aramis is enclosed in thought but not stop watching the fire, Athos realizes Aramis's discomfort, she has a trauma with fire, is logical, but of fear, she moves away from the fire, Athos not want to leave alone and which follows, after dinner with maps spread Athos told where he could have hidden the woman with pain told that the site is part of his past, while all agree with their mission, they went to sleep, to new developments, problems between Athos and Aramis are just nonsense, they almost have reconciled, but still keep their distance, always Athos Aramis yet, try this comfortable, they sleep together, trying to show that you want, Aramis loves Athos, almost forgetting the pain of the past, but is angry with him for not allowing him to be with him, leaving one hand, I hope the next chapter, thanks for sharing ^ ______ ^. |
Adesso che ho riletto gli ultimi capitoli posso affermare con certezza che questa storia è sempre stupenda. Anzi, migliora dopo ogni capitolo. Mi stupisce sempre come tu riesca a rendere reale e attuale (per il milleseicento!) ogni dialogo e ogni comportamento, e accidenti, non vedo l'ora che tu posti i prossimi capitoli...alla faccia della ricorsa per il grande balzo: se questi qui incontrano milady, di lei non rimarranno che brandelli! Bella comunque questa tua idea: mi ricorda tanto la struttura del libro di Dumas, con la vendetta che finalmente si compie! E il tuo Athos è così drammaticamente vivo e umano che lo adoro sempre di più! |