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L'orrendo foco
di GaiaTon
Hello! like this? ^ _____ ^, Excellent chapter, if I had the opportunity to read the fic you mention "The Witch" which unfortunately was left unfinished, I'm glad you were there inspired him to create his story, all I would like have in common is that, despite the fact that Aramis was tortured was not raped, she was proud that he would die a virgin, and that Prince Philip, knowing the identity of who she was, helped to his rescue, I think this Finally, if this, because otherwise the captain could not call her three musketeers to normal, plus I think it is the only help from the royal family with the strange woman who spoke to Athos in the carriage, I think is the Queen Mother "Mary of Medicis," that the reference made by Dartagnan to mention the Swiss mission, which is also the only woman who could help, do not think it Constance, by the way they addressed Athos, the Three Musketeers in his mission fled separately to meet later in the site that would be his refuge until further orders of the captain, they thought the time they were locked up was nothing compared to what I suffered for two months Aramis alone, when they arrived Athos said the conditions he found in Aramis, they did not want to talk, the pain would not let each eventually were sharing their pain, Dartagnan broke the silence and told them how he knew the secret of Aramis and the story of why he did it, finally received news and orders, they should return to normal service will happen now? they will return as if nothing happened?, no arrest warrants?, who handed the trap to Aramis?, at first the captain did not say anything, even when he told the truth?, Aramis was resigned to his fate, not expect a bailout, in some fic handled an agreement between him and the master (if it is discovered, the captain would put her hands and deny all), here is the deal?, about the Aramis stay, she and not be able to be a musketeer, what are the feelings now that he knows Athos Aramis is a woman who loves him?, I hope this story if you have end, not take long to update, thanks for sharing ^ ______ ^. |
Evvai! Finalmente qui!!! :D |
Mi hai lasciata con il fiato sospeso... e adesso? che ne è della donna? Cosa le è successo in prigione? Cosa prova Athos? Spero di non attendere più tanto tempo. Cmq.molto brava! |
semplicemente bellissimo hai descritto tutto com molta precisione ,il nostrio athos è parecchio scosso..vedere il suo amico quasi in fin di via e sapere che ti ama e stato un bel colpo per lui ...spero che aggiornerai presto hai fatto veramente un bel lavoro |
molto bello come inzio la tua aramis è molto realistica mi piace ...pero vedo che non hai aggirnato più ...spero che ci sia un continuo |
mh... Che bella scena!! Anche se non trovo il capitolo di per se corto (specialmente uno dei primi), ci sono alcuni punti molto belli che se fossi stata in te avrei allungato: ad esempio i vari dialoghi con D'Artagnan (soprattutto il secondo) e magari una carrellata piu' approfondita su quello che lei prova per Athos o come si svolge la loro situazione al momento. Certo sono cose piu' facili da pensare a chi legge la storia piu' che a chi la scrive!! Che dire... Il tema e' accattivante, e' "il mio genere" e sembra prendere in considerazione problematiche che sto affrontando anche io... quindi complimenti e hai trovato una nuova lettrice :P |
Come inizio della storia, questo capitolo promette molto bene, ed è scritto in una maniera fantastica, riuscendo a coinvolgere il lettore mentre legge! Sono molto ansiosa di poter leggere che cosa capiterà alla povera Aramis e che cosa faranno gli altri tre moschettieri per cercare di salvarla, perchè si sa che loro farebbero di tutto per proteggere un amico, in questo caso un'amica. Solo una domanda, non ho ben capito se in questa storia la vera identità di Aramis è già stata rivelata agli altri moschettieri, perchè forse non ho letto bene io, ma non sono riuscita a cogliere questa informazione, è solo per sapere! |
Hello! is a pleasure to welcome to the forum and your fic ^ _____ ^, a very interesting night out, Aramis is more male than in other stories, participate in a bet against other men for the favors of the waitress, but also very feminine and flirtatious glances between her and Athos hot, they always have been understood without speaking, Dartagnan knows his secret and also notice the game looks, it's like a younger brother to Aramis, Athos she is in love, but his disguise never can tell, the men behind the table were spying and waiting for the moment were alone Aramis, Athos away when it feels that something bad happens, but it feels silly and goes home, he does not know she's a woman?, but feels something great for your friend?, a treacherous attack makes it easy prey, who denounced?, it was really discovered his identity? I do not like the words Inquisition, drama and erotic fiction in one Athos has to save his Aramis before it's too late!, I congratulate you left us in suspense, not too rough with Aramis or she would be dead than be seen submitted and humiliated by Athos and his friends, but I understand? there is no end?, I hope the next chapter soon, thanks for sharing ^ ____ ^. |
bellissimo l'inizio di quella che si preannuncia una storia incredibile!!!! Per il momento posso solo dirti che sono d'accordo con i precedenti commenti e che seguirò la tua fiction. |
O_O e poi anche :-O |
ciao! |